Đây là các lỗi trong đoạn của bạn:

1) Are you surprised that people in cities with less money are friendlier? why? why not?
=Yes, I was confused about this. I think it will be harder for a poor person in the town than live in the countryside because normally everyone in the city has a job, and they are extremely busy. So it's with an ambiance where nobody cares anybody and I deem the poor in the city are just similar to them.
2) What is the friendliest place you have ever visited?
=I've been to many friendly areas. However, I think my hometown is the friendliest place. Because the people there are highly supportive. For this case, I ask people in the street to know my address is where they are ready to show me the way and even lead me.

3) How friendly are people in your town or city to visitors? => It's difficult for me to say because some people are very friendly but some people are not. In my view, the people where I live are normal, neither too friendly nor too unkind. For pattern, an old woman had crossed a road where many vehicles go. After that, a young man helped her to pass the street. Against that, on another day, so many people here, but none helped her.

Còn đây là mình viết lại theo ý của bạn nhưng phù hợp trong thực tế hơn và mạch lạc hơn:

1) Yes, I was perplexed by this. I believe it will be more difficult for a poor person to live in the city than in the rural because almost everyone in the city has a job and is incredibly busy. So it's in an environment where no one cares about anyone, and I believe the cities impoverished are just like them.

2) I've visited a lot of nice places. My hometown, on the other hand, is the nicest location I've ever visited. Because the folks there are really helpful. For example, if I ask people on the street for my address, they are willing to show me the route and even bring me there.

3) It's hard for me to explain since some individuals are really nice while others are not. People where I reside, in my opinion, are normal, neither overly nice nor too unfriendly. An elderly woman had crossed a busy road to serve as a model. Following that, a young man assisted her in crossing the street. On the other hand, on another day, there were a lot of people present, but no one assisted her.

Chúc bạn học tốt nha ^-^

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1) Are you surprised that people in cities with less money are friendlier? why? why not?

=> Yes, I was shocked about this. I think it will be harder for a poor person in the town than live in the countryside because normally everyone in the city has a business and they are extremely busy. So it's with an ambiance where nobody cares nobody so I consider the poor in the city are just similar to them.

2) What is the friendliest place you have ever visited?

=>I've been to many friendly areas. However, I think my hometown is the friendliest place. Because people there are deeply supportive. For case, I ask people in the street to know my address is where they are willing to show me the way and even lead me.

3) How friendly are people in your town or city to visitors?

=> It's difficult for me to answer because some people are very friendly but some people are not. In my opinion, the people where I live are normally, neither too friendly nor too unkind. For pattern, an old woman had crossed a road where many vehicles go. After that, a young man helped her to pass the street. Opposite that, on another day, so many people here but none helped her.

học tốt!!!