In today's life, many people think that young people should spend time on cultural activities like music, etc. However, many people think that playing sports is better for young people. In my opinion, both work is an important part of life.
First, it is undeniable that cultural activities are good in spirit. It allows them to live and experience other things. Moreover, when people go to the theater, they can learn a lot from the instrument. However, sports activities may be less experienced but it is good for you. Sport brings health to everyone. In addition, sports also teach young people about rules and teamwork. For example, if you join a sports team, solidarity will help you win against all opponents.
In short, I believe that young people should have the opportunity to do many different activities and the balance between sports and cultural activities is the best.

I partly agree with the idea that " Young people should spend more time on cultural activities such as music and theatre and less time on sport." because of the following reasons.

On the first hand, time spent on cultural activities brings us a brunch of benefits. First, music makes us feel relaxed. It is proved that listening to some pieces of music a day such as folk music of classical music helps us feel released and be free from stress. Also we can concentrate to working better while listening to music. Second, cultural activities keep us closer as we can share with our friends more, which makes our friendship become close and neat

However, it is undeniable that time spent on sports gives us a lot of advantages. First, it helps us become healthier as only by half an hour playing sport can we have a strong heart, beautiful muscles and less chance of getting health diseases. In addition, sports also makes us feel spirited and free from pressure. What's more, it improves solidarity and the ability of team work for us, which are skills needed to get success in the future.

In short, both cultural activities and sports have advantages, therefore, we should spend time equally and make full the use of them.

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