Hello everyone! It's only two moths until Tet. On the 6th of Tet my family will travel in Huong Pagoda. My family will get up at 5 a.m and will set off at 5.30! In the morning we will take a boat ride across the Yen stream and we will go to ceremony. I have been here many times and found it crowded and there are many temples. In the afternoon my family will go mountais climbing. After climbing the mountains my family will see the limestone stalactites. In the evening, we will watch songs and play folk game.

5 lỗi sai:

Lỗi 1 : moths = months 

 GT: moths thiếu chữ ; nếu là "moths" thì nghĩa của bài văn sẽ bị thay đổi nên phải là months.

Lỗi 2: in Huong Pagoda = to Hương Pagoda 

GT: in Hương Pagoda nghĩa là trong chùa Hương nhưng trong bài người ta chỉ bảo đi du lịch chùa Hương nên phải là to Hương Pagoda.

Lỗi 3: go to ceremony = go to the ceremony

GT: go to ceremony sẽ sai ngữ pháp nếu không có the nên ta phải viết là go to the ceremony.

Lỗi 4:go mountais = mountanis

GT: "mountais" thiếu chữ n , nếu ko có chữ n  nội dung câu sẽ bị thay đổi .

Lỗi 5: folk game = the folk game.

GT: folk game sẽ sai ngữ pháp nếu thiếu the hoặc a nhưng trong trường hợp này là the vì a là 1 trò chơi dân gian thôi .

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Hello everyone! It's only two months until Tet. On the 6th of Tet my family will travel to Huong Pagoda. My family will get up at 5 a.m and will set off at 5.30! In the morning we will take a boat ride across the Yen stream and we will go to the ceremony. I have been here many times and found it crowded and there are many temples. In the afternoon my family will go mountains climbing. After climbing the mountains my family will see the limestone stalactites. In the evening, we will watch songs and play the folk game.

Hi everybody! Only two months left until Tet. On the 6th of Tet, my family will go to Huong Pagoda. My family will be up at 5am and depart at 5:30am! Tomorrow morning, we will take a boat across Yen stream and go to church. I have been here many times and find it crowded and has many pagodas. In the afternoon my family will go hiking. After climbing the mountain my family will see the limestone stalactites. In the evening, we will watch singing and play folk games. đúng ko