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13 Write a plan and topic sentences for one of the essay questions below. 1 Nowadays, too many young people want to become famous. Do you agree or disagree

Câu hỏi :

Viết đoạn văn giúp e vs ạ

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Lời giải 1 :

Mời bạn xem đáp án tham khảo và giải thích nhé:

3) Success at work brings happiness. Do you agree?

  Plan:

Agree:

-Reasons: Success can bring us motivation to keep trying hard and hard.

-Example: Many workers seem their success at their career is the big enthusiast for them to get better results.

-Lesson: Never stop trying hard in work

 Disagree:

-Reasons: It is just a temporary moment so it doesn't mean that we can keep going on with that outcome.

-Examples: David is a worker, he has just been promoted to head manager of the company. However, he is subjective and makes his company going down after few days.

-Lesson: Success today is just the foundation for tomorrow.

Agree:

As we can see, many people have achieved their goals and already pushed themselves to the limit. Some of them seem their success as a motivation to keep going up and I totally agree with their concept. As many billionaires said, what we achieved today is the launchers for tomorrow. If we can try hard today and never give up, we will succeed further in the future. For example, many workers seem their success in their career as the big enthusiast for them to get better results. Due to that, it has become a new trend for all young entrepreneurs. Moreover, what we can learn from them is that we must never stop trying hard in work.

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Lời giải 2 :

The young today spend a large amount of leisure time in shopping centers. It is fear that this trend can bring about negative influences on the youths and the society. Personally, I strongly disagree with this view. On the one hand, for the young generation spending too much time at the shopping malls can make them waste a great deal of money. As there are dozens of brands with various prices and design for them to choose from, they are easily tempted to buy things impulsively and misspend money on unnecessary stuff. For example, when some big brand names slash the prices, a shopaholic may purchase 10 shirts and jeans in a row and this cost her somewhere $100; however, such items often end up being left in the wardrobe. For the society, because youngsters are unlikely to participate in other activities such as their work or studying, economy may suffer due to less work being done and the youths could slack off their knowledge acquisition, making the national education standard drop significantly.On the other hand, there are also some advantages of this trend. First, in terms of the young, spending time at the malls is considered a method of relaxation. In modern life these days, young people have to deal with lots of pressure from school or workplace, so this trend helps them enjoy their life and effectively release their stress. Second, the society also benefits from this phenomenon. The increase in the amount of consumption will promote manufacture and commerce in the fashion industry, which afterward will create more jobs and boost the economic growth. In conclusion, I strongly believe that devoting a huge amount of time in shopping malls could lead to both negative and positive consequences to the young as well as the society.

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