Each place has its benefits => avantages  and disadvantages so that => so we need to appreciate where we are. And now, in this essay, I'm going to tell you about life in cities  => city and the country. Firstly,=> first  life in townships. => countryside It's big and exciting. Public transport there is good => there is have a good public transport because people there almost => almost people  are extremely busy to run one place other. Finally, life in the countryside. There are boring because of no excitement and noise, no parks and parties. Although that, people there is highly close nature and there have air clean. People have a relaxed lifestyle and they are not busy. The most thing  => the most thing that  I like maybe => bo, there's nothing bad and have nothing to do all day.

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Each place has its benefits and disadvantages so that we need to appreciate where we are. And now, in this essay, I'm going to tell you about life in cities and the country.
Firstly, life in townships. It's big and exciting. Public transport there is good because people there almost are extremely busy to run one place other.
Secondly and also the last, life in the countryside. There are boring because of no excitement and noise, no parks and parties. Although that, people there is highly close nature and there have air clean. People have a relaxed lifestyle and they are not busy. The most thing I like maybe, there's nothing bad and have nothing to do all day. That's all I want to tell you. Thanks for enjoying my essay.