Sửa dùm mình bài này với ạ và giải thích tại sao lại sửa như vậy Hello Sally, I'm just as excited as you that I’m coming to stay with you for a week. Definitely that day would be great In my opinion, going to a concert is better than staying at home because there's music and everyone there is very happy. I don’t think that is a good idea because I'm pretty scared of heights and we'll probably get very tired when we go. In conclusion maybe it would be better to have a party in the garden I think it would be great That’s my idea, See you soon