Dear Sir/Madam,

1 I would like to express my concern about an increasing number of karaoke bars in this city.

2 There are a lot of reasons that I object to these places.

3 Firstly, the owners take too much money from those who come to sing.

4 Secondly, they cause too much noise to the neighborhood.

5  Thirdly, there are a number of pupils who play truant just to go to those places to sing.

6 Last but not least, these bars do harm to the appearance of this city because of their too ugly flashing lights.

7 I want to say I'm not an old-fashioned person.

8 I hope the authority will take this matter into careful consideration.

9 I do not mean to ban them but there should be an effective way to control this kind of entertainment places.

10 I am look forward to seeing the city council do something about this matter.

Yours truly, THOMAS CRUISE.

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`2. `There be / lot reason / I object places.

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`4.` Secondly, / they cause / much noise / neighborhood.

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`6.` Last / least / these bars / do harm / appearance / city / because / their too ugly flashing lights.

→ Last but not least, these bars do harm to the appearance of this city because of their too ugly flashing lights.

`7.` I want / say / I / not / old - fashioned person.

→ I want to say I'm not an old - fashioned person.

`8.` I hope / authority / take / matter / careful consideration.

→ I hope the authority will take this matter into careful consideration.

`9.` I/ not mean / ban then / but there should / effective way / control / this kind / entertainment places.

→ I do not mean to ban them but there should be an effective way to control this kind of entertainment places.

`10.` I/ look / see / city council / do / this matter/.

→ I am look forward to seeing the city council do something about this matter.