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Dear Mrs. Hoa,

My name is Jennifer. I’m currently a second-year student at Jamestown high school. As far as I know, you are the homeroom teacher of the first-year class. So I’m writing this letter to complain about your student. I think that your student is the noisiest and naughtiest student I’ve seen. Do you know? Yesterday, I saw them thrown rubbish in the schoolyard and I felt very angry with that action a lot. I tried to said they couldn’t throw the garbage like that but they don’t listen. Not only that, but they also mocked me. I feel unsatisfied with your class. I think that I would much appreciate it if you criticize and ban your student not litter in the schoolyard. Also, you should teach your student to behave properly and please ensure this sort of problem does not arise again anymore.

Yours faithfully,

Jennifer

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Dear Mrs. Hoa,
My name is Jennifer. I’m currently a second-year student at Jamestown high school.
As far as I know, you are the homeroom teacher of the first-year class. So I’m writing this letter to complain about your student.
In my opinion, I think that your student is the noisiest and naughtiest student I’ve seen.
Do you know? Yesterday, I saw them thrown rubbish in the schoolyard and I felt very angry with that action a lot. I tried to said they couldn’t throw the garbage like that but they don’t listen. Not only that, but they also mocked me.
I really feel unsatisfied with your class. I think that I would much appreciate it if you criticize and ban your student not litter in the schoolyard. Also, you should teach your student to behave properly and please ensure this sort of problem does not arise again anymore.
Yours faithfully,
Jennifer
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