Last month, I bought a dress online which was a lovely, new, red one. The first time I saw it, I liked it immediately because I always dream of having a dress to go to a party, and also because my favorite color is red, too. But then when I looked at the price, I knew that I couldn't afford it, so I had a talk with my mom, and she lent me her credit card, I was really grateful for that. After 3 weeks, it arrived, then as soon as I opened the box, I felt disappointed, the dress was too small to fit me well. After that, I called the online seller, and she refunded me. I know that I was so lucky because most of my friends didn't end up well as me, they didn't have any refund back.

Giải thích: sử dụng quá khứ để kể câu chuyện, viết câu chuyện theo một trình tự thời gian được sắp xếp hợp lý, tránh trả lời câu hỏi một cách trực tiếp (Yes, no question) để đoạn văn được mạch lạc, nên kèm theo vài chi tiết khác.