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<Every spring comes, My family welcomes the Lunar New Year, Also known as "Tet". Our ancestors used to say "New Year, Loc on" . Tet atmosphere is very bustling. Every adult is busy. Busy because of having to prepare many cakes, fruits and cleaning the house to welcome a cozy new year with family.There are many interesting folk games in Tet, Tug,Walking on stilts,Hide and seek, but the most impressive thing about me is the ferris wheel.And especially, on New Year's Eve, there will be a fireworks show, The brightest beams of the night sky, sparkling so attractive.Tet is always the best memories for me, a beautiful time with my family, with everyone.>

⇒Mình nghĩ là bạn nên bổ sung thêm về phần khái niệm "Tết Nguyên Đán" và chi tiết hơn về phần ấn tượng nhất là 'đu quay'. Còn các phần khác thì đầy đủ và hay rồi bạn nhé!

Chúc bạn học tốt~

<Every spring comes, My family welcomes the Lunar New Year, Also known as "Tet". Our ancestors used to say "New Year, Loc on". Tet atmosphere is very bustling. Every adult is busy. They are busy because they have to prepare many cakes and fruits and clean the house to welcome a cosy new year with family. There are many interesting folk games in Tet such as Tug, Walking on stilts, Hide and seek,  but the most impressive things about me is the Ferris wheel. Especially, on New Year's Eve, there will be a fireworks show, The brightest beams of the night sky, sparkling so attractive. Tet is always the best memories for me, a beautiful time with my family, with everyone.>