"Hello, I'm Huyen. I'm in Class 6C1. I enjoy watching TV. I watching TV 45 minutes a day. I spend the time on outdoor activities more time I spend the time watching TV. I don't watching TV when I eating. My kind of programme is cartoon. I don't watching TV on when I not watching it. I think I have good TV watching habits.

* Sửa lại :

1. watching -> watch

2. the -> most of the

3. time I spend the time -> than

4. watching -> watch

5. eating -> eat

6. kind of programme -> favourite programme

7. watching -> turn

8. not watching -> don't watch

Chúc bạn học tốt :3

# Yumi

Sửa:

Hello, i'm Huyen. I'm in class `6C1`. I enjoy watching TV. I usually watch TV for 45 minutes a day. I spend the time on outdoor activities more time i spend the time watching TV. I don't watch TV when i eat. My kind of programme is cartoon. I won't watch TV when I don't want to. I think I have a reasonable habit of watching TV.

Chú thích:

câu 4, muốn thành watching phải có tobe nhưng hiện tại tiếp diễn không hợp lí lắm nên cho về hiện tại đơn.

Câu 6, 8, sau don't không thể nào là V-ing.

Câu cuối không hợp lí