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Mọi người giúp mình sửa đoạn văn bằng TA này với ạ, mình cảm ơn 1 !! Đề bài: There are some environmental problems in your school. The students are throwing tr

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Mọi người giúp mình sửa đoạn văn bằng TA này với ạ, mình cảm ơn 1 !! Đề bài: There are some environmental problems in your school. The students are throwing trash; lack of greens and noises from the traffic on the road nearby. You think something needs to be done about this situation. Write a letter to the principal to complain about this. Write about 100-120 words. Bài làm: 89 Tran Hung Dao Street Ninh Giang town Sept 18th, 2019 Dear The Principal, My name is.................. a student of class 8D at Vinh Secondary School. I'm writing to you now to complain and express my dissatisfaction with the issues at our school. The first issue is that students often throw trash in improper places. I have seen many times bad students litter everywhere in the schoolyard and even in the sewers. This makes the environment polluted, and unpleasant odors for everyone. Moreover, it also causes the sewers blocked especially when it rains heavily. The second problem is that our school lacks of greens. Around the school grounds, there aren't many trees or shadows. Perhaps outdoor activities in the school yard may be not easy when the weather is too hot and sunny. The last problem that I want to mention, there are a lot of loud noises coming from the traffic on the road nearby. It greatly affects the concentration in the lessons of students and teachers. I think we can improve these problems by placing rubbish bins everywhere, requesting students to put trash in them. Besides, we can plant more trees and flowers to make the environment more fresh and green. Finally, propose to the local government about the noise problem to solve. The last thing I hope is that you will take my opinion and find proper ways to solve these issues as soon as possible. Yours sincerely, ..............................

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89 Tran Hung Dao

Street Ninh Giang town

Sept 18th, 2019

Dear (tên trường)'s Principal,

My name is................... I am a student of class 8D at Vinh Secondary School. I'm writing to you now to complain and express my dissatisfaction with the issues at our school. First and foremost, students often throw trash in improper places. I have seen many times bad students litter everywhere in the schoolyard and even in the sewers. This makes the environment polluted, and unpleasant odors for everyone.
Furthermore, it also causes the sewers blocked especially when it rains heavily. Secondly, around the school grounds, there aren't many trees or shadows. Last but not least, I want to mention, is there are a lot of loud noises coming from the traffic on the road nearby. It greatly affects the concentration in the lessons of students and teachers. I think we can improve these problems by placing rubbish bins everywhere, requesting students to put trash in them. Besides, we can plant more trees and flowers to make the environment more fresh and green. Then, we will propose to the local government about the noise problem to solve. Lastly, I hope that you will take my opinion and find proper ways to solve these issues as soon as possible.

Best regards,
.....

!THAMKHAO

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