`1.` Men saw that the moon was really another world. They wondered what it was like. They dreamed of going there.

`-` Dẫn chứng: Then telescopes were made ..... going there.

`2.` Those were the first marks a living thing that ever made on the moon.

`-` Dẫn chứng: The dust was so thick .....  on the moon.

`3.`

`+` They picked up rocks to bring back to the Earth for study.

`+` They dug up dirt to bring back.

`-` Dẫn chứng: They picked up .... bring back..

`4.` " it " in line 3 mean the moon

`-` Dẫn chứng: Long ago a lot of people thought the moon was a god. Other people thought it was just a light in the sky. And others thought it was a big ball on cheese.

`-` Do dòng đầu tiên ta thấy người a nói "Từ lâu, nhiều người nghĩ mặt trăng là ... " thì phía sau đó vẫn phải nói tiếp tục về mặt trăng nhưng đề thay bằng "it" để tránh lặp lại từ "the moon"

* Khi viết văn mà lặp lại từ thì sẽ ko hay / ko đạt điểm cao ( Tiếng Việt hay Tiếng Anh thì đều vậy )

`5.` The first thing the men found was that the moon was covered with dust.

`-` Dẫn chứng: On July 20, 1969, .... with dust.

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-tham khảo !

`1` It help the men saw the moon

`-` Dẫn chứng : Then telescopes were made. And men saw that the moon was really another world.

`2` Because there is a very thick dust on the moon, the men left footprints where they walked.

`-` Dẫn chứng : The first thing the men found was that the moon was covered with dust. The dust was so thick that the men left footprints where they walked

`3` The astronauts brought rocks from moon 

`-` Dẫn chứng : They picked up rocks to bring back to the Earth for study.

`4` {thiếu đề}

`5` The first thing the men found was that the moon was covered with dust.

`-` Dẫn chứng : The first thing the men found was that the moon was covered with dust

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