The current learning pressure in schools is a problem that attracts the attention of the society. Because many students today feel like studying but participating in a battle is too heavy for victory or defeat. Students are no longer passionate about conquering knowledge but are gradually becoming real machine learning. We will be shocked and pained to realize that many students have committed suicide in many countries due to academic pressure. The learning pressure comes from the psychology of many people who value degrees. Since then, many parents as well as the school want their children and students to get good grades and set too many requirements, which causes pressure on students. We can see the shape of achievement disease through the enormous amount of homework and overwhelming hours of schooling of many students today. The pressure to study has had many negative consequences. It deprives children of the opportunity to have fun and participate in physical activities when they have to spend too much time studying. All of us need to be aware of the learning pressure so that we can behave in accordance with ourselves as well as the learning of those around us. Thêm mấy từ dẫn như '' Firstly, Secondly, Finally, In conclusion,...'' vào đoạn văn trên giúp em với ạ :(