dòng2:

Although the city where I live 's not big,...

ko được để viết tắt thế kia nhé

dòng3:

the above-> these 

hay hơn

dòng5:

roads 're-> roads are

đừng viết tắt tuỳ tiện nhé

dòng6:

-muddy and full of mud-> muddy 

thế nghe đỡ lặp

-that-> which

ko dùng that trong câu có dấu phẩy nhé

dòng7:

the roads 're-> the road are

dòng8:

nicer-> more beautiful

đừng dùng nicer

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al hough  => although

traffic jams (dòng 3 từ dưới lên) => traffic jam

makets => markets

I don't hope it happen (nên chuyển thành)=> I don't hope it happen anymore

=>

traffic accidents and traffic jams are the common problems in many big cities.Although my city where I live isn't big, it also has the above problems . I remember, when I was a kid the roads weren't as clean and slick as they are now, it was only made of soil.On rainy days, roads are slippery, muddy , which can result in a traffic accident.Luckily, now, the roads are no longer the same.They are cleaner and nicer so traffic accidents rarely happen but... traffic jam hasn't improved like that, it happens often in markets or schools during rush hours . that 's terrible.I don't hope it happen anymore.