If you read about government's statistics about traffic accident in Vietnam, you will be surprised. In 2017, there are 22.468 people who dead by traffic accident. It's a large number!

- government's sửa thành government.

I think one of that is igorance about traffic rules and traffic safety of people.

- igorance sửa thành ignorance.

So I think you understand about igorance about traffic rules of children in Vietnam. 

- igorance sửa thành ignorance.

I think we need to know about nessecary of road. We can't go everywhere if we don't have road.

- nessecary sửa thành necessity

Especially, there are many holes very large apper in everywhere in road. Road users can be fall down anytime.

- apper sửa thành appear

As the result, they cause more and more traffic accidents. In conclusion, it's nessecary that both government and citizen put their contribution to solve traffic problems in Vietnam.

- nessecary sửa thành necessary

The traffic problem is one of the most popular things in our life. We can't avoid it because it is a part of (bỏ the) life. But there are too many traffic problems in Vietnam especially in the large city like Hai Phong, Ha Noi,… So what is the traffic problem happened in Vietnam? First, there are too many traffic accidents in Vietnam. If you read about the government's statistics about traffic accidents in Vietnam, you will be surprised. In 2017, there are 22.468 people who are dead in traffic accidents. It's a large number! So what do reasons cause traffic accidents? I think one of those is ignorance about traffic rules and traffic safety of people. The children don't know how to ride their vehicles carefully. If you read in here, I really sure you will have a question: Why did you say vehicles, not bicycles? The children just can ride bicycles. But no! They also ride motorbikes even they haven't enough age. So I think you understand about ignorance about traffic rules of children in Vietnam. But it just one reason. There are too many reasons that can be talked but in this paragraph, I won't talk about them. Second, the roads in Vietnam are very bumpy and narrow. OK, We can understand about it because our country isn't a rich country so we don't have enough money to improve roads. But we need to spend more money on roads. I think we need to know about the necessity of road. We can't go everywhere if we don't have the road. So we can't do anything without the road. Therefore, many roads are repaired. As the result, there are many unfinished constructions. And the road is more and more narrow. So, people are traveling don't have enough place to go so they will break their vehicles. Especially, there are many holes very large appear everywhere on the road. Road users can fall down anytime. Third, people in Vietnam don't have a sense of community road safety. They encroach on the road. As the result, they cause more and more traffic accidents. In conclusion, it's necessary that both government and citizen put their contribution to solve traffic problems in Vietnam. We can organize many groups to raise a fund to improve and advance roads in our country. And we can try to clean up our street near our neighborhood and home. We can talk to the school to teach students about road safety. Ok, that is the end! Goodbye, and I will be happy if you write about your conclusion to prevent traffic problems in Vietnam. See you later!

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