Anh/Chị xem hộ em bài này có lỗi sai nào không rồi sửa giúp em với ạ: I dont agree with the idea that : With the help of technology, students will benefit greatly from studying by themselves at home. Technology maybe good but they harm people and get us addicted to it. Firstly, sitting in front of a computer or phone for hours can hurt your eyes. Sencondly, many children do not use electronic devices to study, but they use them to play games. Thirdly, we will get used to using social networks to communicate with people, so we will have communication problems. We also exercise less and are to forego seeing people in person as often. For example, we have an online test, it may be convenient for us, but some students in the class have network problems or can't log into their accounts. In that case, how are we supposed to do our test? However, technology also has its benefits, but it also has its own disadvantages. According to me, with the help of technology, students will not be able to benefit much from self-study at home.