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My best friend , My , does not have healthy eating habits . She usually skips if she has to go to school . When she has it , she usually buys a hamburger and a soft drink at the convenience store next to the school. For lunch, her favorite foods are fried chicken and fried sausages. The good thing is that she prefers to have dinner at home. However, she likes eating a lot of rice and fatty pork for dinner. She hates to eat vegetables but on the contrary, she rarely likes fruits. I think My should change her diet. Frist, she wants to have a healthy body every day , she shouldn’t skip breakfast. Second, she must eat less fast food and exercise regularly to avoid obesity. Not only that, she has to eat more vegetables because it will help her. She should eat less rice and less food for dinner. These changes will help her have a good healthy and fit body.

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My best friend, My, does not have healthy eating habits. She usually skips if she has to go to school. When she has it, she usually buys a hamburger and a soft drink at the convenience store next to the school. For lunch, her favourite foods are fried chicken and fried sausages. The good thing is that she prefers to have dinner at home. However, she likes eating a lot of rice and fatty pork for dinner. She hates to eat vegetables but on the contrary, she rarely likes fruits. I think I should change her diet. First, she wants to have a healthy body every day, she shouldn’t skip breakfast. Second, she must eat less fast food and exercise regularly to avoid obesity. Not only that, she has to eat more vegetables because it will help her. She should eat less rice and less food for dinner. These changes will help her have a good healthy and fit body.

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My best friend, My, does not have healthy eating habits. She usually skips if she has to go to school. When she has it, she usually buys a hamburger and a soft drink at the convenience store next to the school. For lunch, her favourite foods are fried chicken and fried sausages. The good thing is that she prefers to have dinner at home. However, she likes eating a lot of rice and fatty pork for dinner. She hates to eat vegetables but on the contrary, she rarely likes fruits. I think she/My should change her diet. Frist, she wants to have a healthy body every day, she shouldn’t skip breakfast. Second, she must eat less fast food and exercise regularly to avoid obesity. Not only that, she has to eat more vegetables because it will help her. She should eat less rice and less food for dinner. These changes will help her have a good healthy and fit body.

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