Dear Ha,
Hi, I’m on holiday in Nha Trang with the Robinsons. We arrived ( vì last=> quá khứ ) (1) last Saturday. The first day the weather wasn't ( đoạn văn đang chia quá khứ, chỗ này cô nghĩ là was nhưng đề bài cho not be )  ) (2) very nice, so we did 3) some sightseeing ( đi tham quan ngắm cảnh) . I took (4) lost of photographs. On Monday we hired (5) a car and drove (6) out into the country. We stopped (7) for ( dừng lại để ) lunch at a lovely little village and then in the afternoon we found (8) a beautiful beach. Last night we went (9) to the cinema. We didn't get back (10) till ( ko quay lại cho đến khi ) about 11p.m., so we got up 11) late this morning ( quá khứ ) and we decided (12) to ( quyết định làm gì )have a relaxing day by the hotel swimming pool. So that’s where I am now. 

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Dear Ha,
Hi, I’m on holiday in Nha Trang with the Robinsons. We arrived ( vì last=> quá khứ ) (1) last Saturday. The first day the weather wasn't ( đoạn văn đang chia quá khứ, chỗ này cô nghĩ là was nhưng đề bài cho not be )  ) (2) very nice, so we did 3) some sightseeing ( đi tham quan ngắm cảnh) . I took (4) lost of photographs. On Monday we hired (5) a car and drove (6) out into the country. We stopped (7) for ( dừng lại để ) lunch at a lovely little village and then in the afternoon we found (8) a beautiful beach. Last night we went (9) to the cinema. We didn't get back (10) till ( ko quay lại cho đến khi ) about 11p.m., so we got up 11) late this morning ( quá khứ ) and we decided (12) to ( quyết định làm gì )have a relaxing day by the hotel swimming pool. So that’s where I am now. 

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