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`-` Many teachers have been placed on the same pedestal as parents in terms of developing the social and cognitive abilities of children. Teachers and parents work together to provide an overall growth for children in education.

`-` This is because teachers not only impart knowledge, but also play an important role in promoting the communication and social skills of young students.

`-` For example, many successful people say that they owe their success to their teachers who took special care while guiding them during school days.

`-` Some of us may have a common perception that studying is only required for kids between kindergarten and elementary school, and that students’ success depends on how well they prepare for each subject.

`-` Some children start getting help from parents as soon as they hit primary school. While some people feel that children should be punished for their school mistakes, others feel that shielding them from the consequences can only spoil them.

`-` As every parent and teacher knows, students spend part of their days at home and the rest of their time in school.

`-` This division of time creates a unique environment within which children can develop socially, emotionally, and academically. 

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Teachers play a greater role in the intellectual development of children than parents, because they are with students more than they are at home. Many teachers have been placed on the same pedestal as parents in terms of developing the social and cognitive abilities of children. Teachers and parents work together to provide an overall growth for children in education.

Teachers play a greater role in the intellectual development of children than parents. This statement is true if we consider the aspect of imparting knowledge. Teachers are primarily responsible for the intellectual development of children. This is because teachers not only impart knowledge, but also play an important role in promoting the communication and social skills of young students. Furthermore, some experts claim that parents are not as influential as teachers in determining their children's progress in academic or non-academic fields. For example, many successful people say that they owe their success to their teachers who took special care while guiding them during school days. Therefore, it can be concluded that teachers are more responsible than parents for the intellectual development of children.

Some of us may have a common perception that studying is only required for kids between kindergarten and elementary school, and that students’ success depends on how well they prepare for each subject. Some children start getting help from parents as soon as they hit primary school. While some people feel that children should be punished for their school mistakes, others feel that shielding them from the consequences can only spoil them. Some argue firmly that only children grow into responsible citizens if teachers are hard on them and some accept that the primary responsibility for nurturing the intellectual development of children lies with teachers.

As every parent and teacher knows, students spend part of their days at home and the rest of their time in school. This division of time creates a unique environment within which children can develop socially, emotionally, and academically. In my opinion, parents play a greater role in the emotional and social development of students whereas teachers play the most significant role in ensuring academic success.    

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