THESIS STATEMENT 1:

Topic sentence 1: Firstly, a long vacation allows students to gain working experience and be more independent.

Topic sentence 2: Secondly, having a long vacation grants students with opportunity to expand their social knowledge as they can travel and learn about culture and people.

Topic sentence 3: Thirdly, taking a long vacation helps students unwind and reenergize themselves.

THESIS STATEMENT 2:

Topic sentence 1: Small office gives employees more chances of promotion than in large company due to fiercer competition among staffs in big companies.

Topic sentence 2: Working in a small office gives employees greater sense of involvement than working in a large one as each individual working in a small firm needs to care about almost every operating activities of the company.